You should take more time after you write, to re-read what you've written.
That's usually when I notice that I've missed a period or comma, or I've misplaced a quotation mark.
If possible, try to separate your actions from the speech, or if you are going to write a sentence where one person asks, and another one answers, break them into two sentences. It does make it easier to read.
Interesting.
If I could offer some constructive criticism?
You should take more time after you write, to re-read what you've written.
That's usually when I notice that I've missed a period or comma, or I've misplaced a quotation mark.
If possible, try to separate your actions from the speech, or if you are going to write a sentence where one person asks, and another one answers, break them into two sentences. It does make it easier to read.